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The revenge
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27 Apr 2011, 00:06
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Heiz, sper sa te tii si de celelalte ficuri. :> Ma bucur,totusi, ca ai mai inceput unul.
 Care pe deasupra are legatura si cu HP.  Deci,am doar cateva chestii de zis  :Quote:Am clătinat din făcându-le semn că sunt bineCred ca voiai sa spui: " Am clatinat din cap .... Sper sa nu te superi, dar daca faci un fic nu mi se pare prea interesant sa pui initialele . Mai dragut suna : a zis, a spus, a facut, a murmurat ... etc. Desi uneori suna repetitiv, poti folosi sinonime. In rest , ficul este superb. Descrii frumos. Si astept un NEXT. ![[Image: giphy.gif]](https://media3.giphy.com/media/Cn1dqRNSIJ5n2/giphy.gif) |
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The revenge - by Effy K. Dietrich - 26 Apr 2011, 17:14
RE: The revenge - by Rosalie Vivienne Alden - 27 Apr 2011, 00:06
RE: The revenge - by Effy K. Dietrich - 27 Apr 2011, 00:12
RE: The revenge - by Eliza G. Blest - 27 Apr 2011, 15:02
RE: The revenge - by Colin Hawkeye Rovson - 27 Apr 2011, 20:43
RE: The revenge - by Effy K. Dietrich - 29 Apr 2011, 23:16
RE: The revenge - by Rosalie Vivienne Alden - 30 Apr 2011, 10:30
RE: The revenge - by Eliza G. Blest - 30 Apr 2011, 11:56
RE: The revenge - by Trinity Bella Turner - 30 Apr 2011, 13:35
RE: The revenge - by Effy K. Dietrich - 10 May 2011, 13:34
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