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The Sunrise
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02 Oct 2011, 16:41
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Mda,deci nu prea am ce sa obiectez,am vazut cateva greseli,dar sunt sigura ca au fost facute din neatentie.
Imi place stilul tau de a scrie este lejer si usor de citit Asta inseamna ca vreau capitolul II :> Keep work!
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The Sunrise - by Lexie Stryder - 01 Oct 2011, 12:08
RE: The Sunrise - by Anaella L. Hathway - 01 Oct 2011, 12:35
RE: The Sunrise - by Ginny Anne Alden - 01 Oct 2011, 13:13
RE: The Sunrise - by Effy K. Dietrich - 01 Oct 2011, 13:50
RE: The Sunrise - by Lexie Stryder - 01 Oct 2011, 20:50
RE: The Sunrise - by Anaella L. Hathway - 01 Oct 2011, 22:29
RE: The Sunrise - by Lexie Stryder - 02 Oct 2011, 13:40
RE: The Sunrise - by Effy K. Dietrich - 02 Oct 2011, 14:23
RE: The Sunrise - by Anaella L. Hathway - 02 Oct 2011, 15:12
RE: The Sunrise - by Ginny Anne Alden - 02 Oct 2011, 16:41
RE: The Sunrise - by Isolde du Maurier - 03 Oct 2011, 16:12
RE: The Sunrise - by Eliza G. Blest - 10 Dec 2011, 01:07
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este lejer si usor de citit
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