Peripeţii la Hogwarts
11 Jul 2010, 22:50
Post: #149
deci eu vreau sa intelegeti ca eu scriu acest comm[ care se presupune a fi kilometric] doar pentru ca sormea ma OBLIGAT

deci, imi place foarte mult acest capitol si acest fic, in primul rand pentru ca e scris de tine, in al doilea rand pentru ca..... pentru ca nu stiu[ nu mai gasesc alte motive [apropo, voua de ce va place[iar incep sa fac off =))[ imi place sa fac offf] ar trebui sa comentez capitolul acum dar nam ce scrie si sormea mia dat ordine serioasa sa fie un comm kilometric[ nu prea stiu eu cum sa fac asta [cred ca o sa incep sa vorbesc despre cu totul altceva decat despre capitol [stai.... deja fac asta] mama cat de multe paranteze am pus ]]]]]]
imi place ficul asta pentru ca e plin de actiune[defapt nu e prea multa actiune pana acum [ asta imi aminteste ca si eu trebuie sa bag mai multa actiune in ficul meu [ asta imi aminteste ca eu trebuie sa pun nextul la ficul meu [asta imi aminteste ca iar am inceput sa vorbesc prea mult despre cu totul alte chestii]]] si e ca si cum as citi din nou HP [de cate ori sa mai spus asta ] dar chiar asa este. imi place cum descrii si cum povestesti la persoana a treia [ chestia asta e cam unica pe aici, din toate ficurle pe care leam citit e singurul la persoana a treia[ iti trebuie foarte multa ingeniozitate si talent sa scrii la persoana a treia[ asta imi aminteste ca si eu scriu la persoana intai .... si nu numai eu.... deci va rog cai care scrieti la persoana intai sa ignorati ceam scris mai sus ]]

din capitolul asta se inteleg multe[ prea multe]
deci stiam pana acum ca Abe e plecat si ceea ce face el e foarte important pentru climaxul ficului.
acum inteleg ca el sa dus sa caute ceva care va fi ascuns in padurea interzisa si aparat de Fluffy [ vai ador cainele ala vreau si eu unu ]

dar nu prea sunt de acord cu asta, puteai sa fii si tu mai originala si sa nul mai bagi pe Fluffy[ deci imi place si numele lui, imi place totul la el da nu pot sa am si eu unu[ cred ca stiu ce voi face cand voi fi mare ma fac savant nebun care face experimente stupide pe caini ca sa inventez un caine cu trei capete ]]
deci puteai sa scrii cu totul si cu totul alteceva, dar imi place ca lai bagat pe Fluf.... gata nui mai spun numele ca iar incep sa spun prostii despre vremurile mele in care voi fi un savant nebun[ stai un pic... deja fac asta ]

mia placut faza cum il intrerupe Alice pe Hagrid la faza cu potiunea Lupis si mia mai placut faza cu
-Bine, zise Albus pe un ton sarcastic, sã presupunem cã ajungem la Fluffy fãrã sã fim vãzuþi. Cum plãnuieºti sã trecem de un câine cu trei capete? Întregi?!

oare cum o sa treaca de Marele caine cu trei capete mare mister
ei bine, eu deja stiu si sunt sigura ca toata lumea stie

deci sper ca esti multumita de commul meu Kilometric pentru ca mam chinuit putin sal scriu

Opusul iubirii e indiferenta, nu ura. Daca ma urasti, inseamna ca inca iti mai pasa

de mine si ca eu pot sa te modelez cum vreau.


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Peripeţii la Hogwarts - by Alice Morris - 07 Apr 2010, 09:39
RE: Peripeþii la Hogwarts - by Alice Morris - 07 Apr 2011, 17:18
RE: Peripeţii la Hogwarts - by Bell Evans - 08 Apr 2011, 15:47
RE: Peripeţii la Hogwarts - by Alice Morris - 08 Apr 2011, 17:47
RE: Peripeţii la Hogwarts - by Fleur Delacour - 15 Apr 2011, 16:28
RE: Peripeţii la Hogwarts - by Bell Evans - 26 Apr 2011, 22:03
RE: Peripeţii la Hogwarts - by Alice Morris - 26 Apr 2011, 22:15
Re: Peripeþii la Hogwarts - by Bell Evans - 07 Apr 2010, 09:52
Re: Peripeþii la Hogwarts - by Alicia Crowle - 07 Apr 2010, 11:58
Re: Peripeþii la Hogwarts - by Alice Morris - 07 Apr 2010, 14:59
Re: Peripeþii la Hogwarts - by Bell Evans - 07 Apr 2010, 15:08
Re: Peripeþii la Hogwarts - by Alice Morris - 07 Apr 2010, 15:29
Re: Peripeþii la Hogwarts - by Alice Morris - 08 Apr 2010, 18:54
Re: Peripeþii la Hogwarts - by Alice Morris - 09 Apr 2010, 14:43
Re: Peripeþii la Hogwarts - by Alice Morris - 09 Apr 2010, 15:57
Re: Peripeþii la Hogwarts - by Bell Evans - 09 Apr 2010, 16:13
Re: Peripeþii la Hogwarts - by Alice Morris - 09 Apr 2010, 16:15
Re: Peripeþii la Hogwarts - by Rose Evans - 10 Apr 2010, 16:23
Re: Peripeþii la Hogwarts - by Alice Morris - 11 Apr 2010, 18:50
Re: Peripeþii la Hogwarts - by Bell Evans - 11 Apr 2010, 18:54
Re: Peripeþii la Hogwarts - by Rose Evans - 11 Apr 2010, 22:10
Re: Peripeþii la Hogwarts - by Alice Morris - 11 Apr 2010, 22:12
Re: Peripeþii la Hogwarts - by Alice Morris - 18 Apr 2010, 22:48
Re: Peripeþii la Hogwarts - by Bell Evans - 19 Apr 2010, 14:00
Re: Peripeþii la Hogwarts - by Alice Morris - 30 Apr 2010, 16:46
Re: Peripeþii la Hogwarts - by Bell Evans - 30 Apr 2010, 18:16
Re: Peripeþii la Hogwarts - by Alice Morris - 06 May 2010, 16:27
Re: Peripeþii la Hogwarts - by Alice Morris - 06 May 2010, 18:16
Re: Peripeþii la Hogwarts - by Bell Evans - 06 May 2010, 19:32
Re: Peripeþii la Hogwarts - by Alice Morris - 06 May 2010, 20:57
Re: Peripeþii la Hogwarts - by Alice Morris - 07 May 2010, 14:44
Re: Peripeþii la Hogwarts - by Bell Evans - 07 May 2010, 14:55
Re: Peripeþii la Hogwarts - by Alice Morris - 07 May 2010, 17:17
Re: Peripeþii la Hogwarts - by Matt I. River - 07 May 2010, 18:02
Re: Peripeþii la Hogwarts - by Matt I. River - 07 May 2010, 18:08
Re: Peripeþii la Hogwarts - by Matt I. River - 07 May 2010, 19:11
Re: Peripeþii la Hogwarts - by Alice Morris - 08 May 2010, 15:19
Re: Peripeþii la Hogwarts - by Alice Morris - 17 May 2010, 21:30
Re: Peripeþii la Hogwarts - by Matt I. River - 17 May 2010, 21:35
Re: Peripeþii la Hogwarts - by Alice Morris - 22 May 2010, 18:53
Re: Peripeþii la Hogwarts - by Matt I. River - 22 May 2010, 18:55
Re: Peripeþii la Hogwarts - by Sophia Mason - 22 May 2010, 19:09
Re: Peripeþii la Hogwarts - by Bell Evans - 22 May 2010, 19:54
Re: Peripeþii la Hogwarts - by Alice Morris - 22 May 2010, 21:06
Re: Peripeþii la Hogwarts - by Bell Evans - 22 May 2010, 21:14
Re: Peripeþii la Hogwarts - by Sophia Mason - 22 May 2010, 22:00
Re: Peripeþii la Hogwarts - by Alice Morris - 24 May 2010, 09:14
Re: Peripeþii la Hogwarts - by Matt I. River - 24 May 2010, 14:03
Re: Peripeþii la Hogwarts - by Alice Morris - 25 May 2010, 19:48
Re: Peripeþii la Hogwarts - by Bell Evans - 25 May 2010, 19:49
Re: Peripeþii la Hogwarts - by Alice Morris - 25 May 2010, 19:59
Re: Peripeþii la Hogwarts - by Matt I. River - 25 May 2010, 20:00
Re: Peripeþii la Hogwarts - by Alice Morris - 25 May 2010, 22:06
Re: Peripeþii la Hogwarts - by Matt I. River - 25 May 2010, 22:08
Re: Peripeþii la Hogwarts - by Alice Morris - 25 May 2010, 22:10
Re: Peripeþii la Hogwarts - by Alice Morris - 30 May 2010, 12:57
Re: Peripeþii la Hogwarts - by Bell Evans - 30 May 2010, 12:58
Re: Peripeþii la Hogwarts - by Sophia Mason - 30 May 2010, 13:13
Re: Peripeþii la Hogwarts - by Matt I. River - 30 May 2010, 13:19
Re: Peripeþii la Hogwarts - by Alice Morris - 30 May 2010, 16:33
Re: Peripeþii la Hogwarts - by Alice Morris - 03 Jun 2010, 23:08
Re: Peripeþii la Hogwarts - by Sophia Mason - 03 Jun 2010, 23:39
Re: Peripeþii la Hogwarts - by Matt I. River - 04 Jun 2010, 09:55
Re: Peripeþii la Hogwarts - by Sophia Mason - 04 Jun 2010, 12:12
Re: Peripeþii la Hogwarts - by Bell Evans - 04 Jun 2010, 12:58
Re: Peripeþii la Hogwarts - by Alice Morris - 04 Jun 2010, 13:16
Re: Peripeþii la Hogwarts - by Sophia Mason - 17 Jun 2010, 18:39
Re: Peripeþii la Hogwarts - by Alice Morris - 17 Jun 2010, 21:01
Re: Peripeþii la Hogwarts - by Alice Morris - 18 Jun 2010, 18:31
Re: Peripeþii la Hogwarts - by Bell Evans - 18 Jun 2010, 18:37
Re: Peripeþii la Hogwarts - by Sophia Mason - 18 Jun 2010, 18:46
Re: Peripeþii la Hogwarts - by Alice Morris - 21 Jun 2010, 14:34
Re: Peripeþii la Hogwarts - by Matt I. River - 21 Jun 2010, 21:59
Re: Peripeþii la Hogwarts - by Alice Morris - 21 Jun 2010, 22:04
Re: Peripeþii la Hogwarts - by Matt I. River - 21 Jun 2010, 23:43
Re: Peripeþii la Hogwarts - by Matt I. River - 22 Jun 2010, 14:12
Re: Peripeþii la Hogwarts - by Alice Morris - 22 Jun 2010, 14:16
Re: Peripeþii la Hogwarts - by Matt I. River - 22 Jun 2010, 14:17
Re: Peripeþii la Hogwarts - by Alice Morris - 11 Jul 2010, 18:49
Re: Peripeþii la Hogwarts - by Sophia Mason - 11 Jul 2010, 19:19
Re: Peripeþii la Hogwarts - by Bell Evans - 11 Jul 2010, 21:32
Re: Peripeþii la Hogwarts - by Alice Morris - 11 Jul 2010, 21:48
Re: Peripeþii la Hogwarts - by Bell Evans - 11 Jul 2010, 21:51
Re: Peripeþii la Hogwarts - by Alice Morris - 11 Jul 2010, 21:54
Re: Peripeþii la Hogwarts - by Bell Evans - 11 Jul 2010, 21:57
Re: Peripeþii la Hogwarts - by Sophia Mason - 11 Jul 2010, 22:50
Re: Peripeþii la Hogwarts - by Bell Evans - 23 Jul 2010, 11:27
Re: Peripeþii la Hogwarts - by Bell Evans - 23 Jul 2010, 11:41
Re: Peripeþii la Hogwarts - by Alice Morris - 23 Jul 2010, 11:42
Re: Peripeþii la Hogwarts - by Bell Evans - 23 Jul 2010, 11:44
Re: Peripeþii la Hogwarts - by Alice Morris - 23 Jul 2010, 11:53
Re: Peripeþii la Hogwarts - by Alice Morris - 27 Jul 2010, 15:27
Re: Peripeþii la Hogwarts - by Alice Morris - 08 Oct 2010, 15:35
Re: Peripeþii la Hogwarts - by Bell Evans - 10 Oct 2010, 16:08
Re: Peripeþii la Hogwarts - by Bell Evans - 24 Oct 2010, 20:58
Re: Peripeþii la Hogwarts - by Alice Morris - 29 Oct 2010, 23:10
Re: Peripeþii la Hogwarts - by Bell Evans - 30 Oct 2010, 13:01
Re: Peripeþii la Hogwarts - by Alice Morris - 30 Oct 2010, 13:02
Re: Peripeþii la Hogwarts - by Bell Evans - 30 Oct 2010, 13:09
Re: Peripeþii la Hogwarts - by Bell Evans - 30 Oct 2010, 13:24
Re: Peripeþii la Hogwarts - by Alice Morris - 30 Oct 2010, 13:27
Re: Peripeþii la Hogwarts - by Bell Evans - 30 Oct 2010, 13:29
Re: Peripeþii la Hogwarts - by Alice Morris - 30 Oct 2010, 16:25
Re: Peripeþii la Hogwarts - by Alice Morris - 30 Oct 2010, 16:34
Re: Peripeþii la Hogwarts - by Bell Evans - 30 Oct 2010, 19:42
Re: Peripeþii la Hogwarts - by Alice Morris - 31 Oct 2010, 12:24
Re: Peripeþii la Hogwarts - by Alice Morris - 24 Dec 2010, 21:33
Re: Peripeþii la Hogwarts - by Alice Morris - 24 Dec 2010, 22:22
Re: Peripeþii la Hogwarts - by Bell Evans - 24 Dec 2010, 22:45

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