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20 Sep 2010, 17:46
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Am citit si eu, mai cu intarziere, ca azi la Info cand am vazut ca ai pus capitolul nu puteam sa ma concentrez ca palavragea profa
Deci, capitolul asta a iesit foarte bine pacat ca faci capitolele atat de scurte si deja se intra in actiune, sau cel putin ne dai destule detalii care sa ne puna pe ganduri si sa ne lase in suspans ai scris undeva "Dar aveam sã aflu cumva.." cred ca ar fi sunat mai bine "Dar voi afla...Trebuie sa aflu..." Sa isi auto'impuna chestia asta, da un efect mai dramatic, mai nu stiu cum...dar in opinia mea ar suna si s'ar potrivi mai bine abia astept urmatorul capitol Next ![[Image: 2igkmd1.png]](http://i50.tinypic.com/2igkmd1.png) |
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.So Wrong. - by Isabella River - 11 Sep 2010, 01:33
Re: .So Wrong. - by Bella Emily Rose - 11 Sep 2010, 10:00
Re: .So Wrong. - by Hayley M. Alden - 11 Sep 2010, 12:01
Re: .So Wrong. - by Alice Swan - 11 Sep 2010, 12:07
Re: .So Wrong. - by Isabella River - 11 Sep 2010, 12:34
Re: .So Wrong. - by Bella Emily Rose - 11 Sep 2010, 13:21
Re: .So Wrong. - by Bell Evans - 11 Sep 2010, 17:00
Re: .So Wrong. - by Helena Daphne Rose - 11 Sep 2010, 17:10
Re: .So Wrong. - by Alice Morris - 11 Sep 2010, 17:57
Re: .So Wrong. - by Sophia Mason - 11 Sep 2010, 21:33
Re: .So Wrong. - by Isabella River - 14 Sep 2010, 21:51
Re: .So Wrong. - by Alice Morris - 14 Sep 2010, 21:59
Re: .So Wrong. - by Helena Daphne Rose - 14 Sep 2010, 22:03
Re: .So Wrong. - by Bella Emily Rose - 15 Sep 2010, 07:58
Re: .So Wrong. - by Matt I. River - 15 Sep 2010, 18:12
Re: .So Wrong. - by Isabella River - 15 Sep 2010, 20:23
Re: .So Wrong. - by Desiree Rose Goth - 18 Sep 2010, 21:55
Re: .So Wrong. - by Isabella River - 18 Sep 2010, 21:59
Re: .So Wrong. - by Isabella River - 19 Sep 2010, 15:15
Re: .So Wrong. - by Desiree Rose Goth - 19 Sep 2010, 15:21
Re: .So Wrong. - by Bella Emily Rose - 19 Sep 2010, 15:36
Re: .So Wrong. - by Isabella River - 20 Sep 2010, 11:37
Re: .So Wrong. - by Bella Emily Rose - 20 Sep 2010, 11:52
Re: .So Wrong. - by Isabella River - 20 Sep 2010, 11:55
Re: .So Wrong. - by Alice Morris - 20 Sep 2010, 17:46
Re: .So Wrong. - by Helena Daphne Rose - 20 Sep 2010, 18:43
Re: .So Wrong. - by Isabella River - 22 Sep 2010, 21:06
Re: .So Wrong. - by Bell Evans - 23 Sep 2010, 15:06
Re: .So Wrong. - by Desiree Rose Goth - 30 Sep 2010, 18:49
Re: .So Wrong. - by Katya Sokorov - 30 Sep 2010, 19:19
Re: .So Wrong. - by Helena Daphne Rose - 08 Oct 2010, 13:52
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