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Probleme cu engleza . Corectati-ma .
28 Dec 2012, 21:26 (This post was last modified: 28 Dec 2012, 21:49 by Lewin Lovwell.)
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Ok , imi fac un blog , ma rog blogulet ..
Vreau sa pun DISCLAIMER , deoarece o sa scriu si cateva chestii despre Harry Potter + un mic Fanfic (o sa scriu si aici direct intregul capitol , nu il mai pun pe parti) si ma cam bate engleza .Aveti mai jos ceea ce am scris , corectati-ma va rog . Finna

This story was written just because I had some ideas for a sequel to Harry Potter series . I'm not JK Rowling,I make no profit from this story . However please do not copy this story on your sites. Thank you .

Daca ma puteti ajuta cu un Disclaimer mai bun , engleza + romana , v-as fi recunoscator . Eu nu prea stiu ce ar trebui sa scriu ...

LATER EDIT : SE SCRIE ALBUS POTTER AND THE HEIR OF A FOUL sau ALBUS POTTER AND THE HEIR OF AN FOUL
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28 Dec 2012, 22:04
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28 Dec 2012, 22:17 (This post was last modified: 28 Dec 2012, 22:23 by Lewin Lovwell.)
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Multumesc mult . Ma poti ajuta si cu cealalta problema ? E scris bine disclaimerul ?
Trebuie scris ceva de genul :
Majoritatea personajelor si locurilor din aceasta poveste nu imi apartin , ele apartin seriei create de J.K. Rowling . Aceasta poveste a fost scrisa pentru ca am avut cateva idei de continuare a seriei . Nu obtin niciun profit din aceasta poveste .
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28 Dec 2012, 22:27
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  • I do not own most of the characters and the places in this story, the belong to the series created by J.K.Rowling.
    This story was written because I had some ideas for a sequel of the series. I do not get any profit from this story.

    Nu stiu daca e foarte bine, pentru ca nu le am cu traducerile, insa sper ca e ceea ce vroiai Heart
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28 Dec 2012, 22:29
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"All the characters and places mentioned in the books belong to J.K. Rowling. I make no profit from this story, nor I ever intend to. It is just my idea of a sequel. However, please don't post this to other sites and claim as your own."

Sper ca e bine ce am scris. Nu mi-am mai folosit engleza cam de multisor..
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28 Dec 2012, 22:38 (This post was last modified: 28 Dec 2012, 22:39 by Lewin Lovwell.)
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Multumesc amandurora . O sa o folosesc pe a lui Alain .
Inca odata multumesc .
Ati fost de mare ajutor .
Puteti da T.C.
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28 Dec 2012, 23:12
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28 Dec 2012, 23:31 (This post was last modified: 28 Dec 2012, 23:32 by Lewin Lovwell.)
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Don`t worry , it`s not sugar . Finna
No , seriously... don`t worry you did just fine, and thanks , again . >Happywide<

Engleza mea subreda .. Finna
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  • Stai linistit, nimeni nu e perfect. Desi multi spun ca stiu engleza si de fapt nu stiu X_x
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